ext_354696 ([identity profile] dracoena.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] elvenpiratelady 2007-07-07 09:18 am (UTC)

This is magnificent!

"Surrounded by darker trees"... a nice metaphor on fading.

And the glimpses of Gondolin! They are all sudden and poignant, especially Aredhel with her hair streaming. It´s sad when you remember what happened to each one of them.

And btw, love your warnings. Indeed, LOL!

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